This is part of the feedback I have gained. I have also received verbal feedback throughout the creation of the blog so far.
I gained this feedback from my teacher who often reviews my work. As you can see from the image the feedback was the within the first week of beginning the blog and I had a small number of posts at the time, but this was going in the right direction for the time I had spent on this so far.
From the "even better if" feedback I was able to highlight my weaker aspects, those being that further detail should be added to the posts to show my research and the ability I have to include different media's. From this feedback I added more detail to all of my posts and embedded, new ict media's, such as a Prezi, images and YouTube clips.
This is my second piece of feedback I have received about my contribution to the blog
from my "ebi" I have went through the blog and corrected mistakes in grammar, punctuation and typing error. I then followed through to contextualise my images on my prezi, so they looked better presented.
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