Feedback on the magazine

After creating the magazine, I collected some feedback from my target audience about what they thought about our promotional product. 

Some of the positive feedback that we received was..

- The layering of the images and the text is well presented and creates good depth to the magazine

- The layout of the 'The Recollection' title at the bottom of the page is well structured and stands out well on the page

- The side bar on the left creates a professional feel to the magazine and is creative, also its good how it includes the website for the magazine and what is included inside the issue.

- The cracked effect which is over the characters face is effective as it helps an audience assume that the character has a background, this is also shown through the facial expression, mysterious.

Some of the constructive criticism we received was...

- The background image is dull it may look better brightened up.

> In response to this we brightened up the background image and this is shown on the magazine above. 

- You could make the cracked effect across the characters face more prominent as it is quite faint.

> In response to this we decided to leave the faint cracked effect as the bolder cracks were not effective and not what we had planned.