Feedback

Both Sophie and I have decided that it would good idea to upload our feedback sheets that we receive and let you know how we improved upon this constructive criticism. As we have both got some feedback I will be the one to upload mine first and comment on how I have changed things in order to get a better grade.

I agree that my presentation on this blog is very clear and well set out. I think if everything is organised and in the right place everything is easy to find. This way we both can check if we have everything that is meant to be outlined on our blog and see if there is anything missing.
As for the improvement, we got this feedback sheet just over a week ago and since then all of our work that we have done has been uploaded to our blog and we have continued with frequent post since receiving this. So I feel that we have done well to progress with this comment and enhance what we have already done.

This piece of feedback was given to me earlier this week, and the comments on what both Sophie and I have done well, I think are appropriate as we have both tried our best to include various key words that relate to the topic. We would not only like to progress without terminology for our exam where it will help but also to enhance our blogs and to show a clear understanding of what we are both learning as we move forward in this course.
Regarding the improvements, Sophie and I went back on all the post that we have both published to proofread them and find any incorrect spelling which we needed to change. Considering the point made on more posts as we are both a joint blog, we have had a look at our peers work to see the diverse pages that they have posted and planned what else we could feature on our blog in order to make it a combined extra effort to get us the grades we are aiming for.

In conclusion to this I think it is a good idea for us to upload our feedback as it will mean that we improve on our work to get the best grade possible. I also found the feedback that I received very helpful and would be happy to receive any opinions either from my peers or from a group discussion.